Afraid
Because I
Cannot see
Down the way
Every sound
Frightens me --
What could that sound be?
Author notes
ABC poem
An ABC poem has 5 lines that create a mood, picture, or feeling.
Lines 1 through 4 are made up of words, phrases or clauses - and the first word of each line is in alphabetical order from the first word.
Line 5 is one sentence, beginning with any letter.
A contest entry
- Unrhymed Form Poetry by Metaphorist.
600 points, ended April 23, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please only your True Thoughts Allowed!!!!
Comments
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This was very good. Fear runs through this piece. I am not one for poetical 'form' as I just write when the feeling gets me. But, I can really appreciate those who write in 'form' and are creative with it. Good luck in the contest.
Love
Wayne Leon
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Well done though I think you have two more lines than necessary. I'll let it slide
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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this is an amazing write and I love the abc write its beautiful and just wow well done and best of luck to you
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