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Jeff Green

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Jeff Green

Once upon a time there lived a strange man
He only spoke in rhyme, when he ruled his land
His name was Jeff Green… and he had a plan
Sometimes he was mean thinking he was grand

Jeff Green was a legend, in his own mind
Jeff came from England, land across the sea
Jeff loved the girls or so he was inclined
Writing little pearls in his poetry

Now here is Jeffery’s plan, how to stop the war
He will make each man, only speak in verse
If he can succeed, then forevermore
Rhymes will be our need, things will not get worse

His accent may be funny, Jeff Green wears a scarf
So comment with a bunny and please try not to barf

 

 

 

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Multisyllabic iambic nothing Sonnet.

bunny = applause on AP

For: AP poet "Cricketjeff"

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  • Ellis gold member
    February 8
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    Anything...

    that would stop war...


  • penman gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Oh my what a poem. And for such a gift poet. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.

  • StroonsGreen
    April 22, 2008
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    Are you guys "together"??? lol


  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    Floridian maiden Queen of all form
    Sonneting goddess who sings to the skies
    Accent amazin' humour so warm
    Filled with such oddness what a surprise

    Meter plusperfect except when its not
    Innocent rhyming is always your mark
    But even more perfect when you turn it hot
    Erotical timing you do for a lark

    This sonnet so rinkydink is just for you
    I tried not to make it in meter sublime
    A tribute more kinky I felt met the cue
    But I cannot fake it When it comes to rhyme

    Amera you loony I love what you wrote
    So here's something croony that no-one will quote

  • Papagallo
    April 22, 2008
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    Try again: Lots of to ya!

  • Papagallo
    April 22, 2008

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    well if we would all speak in rhyme that would be great. Poets make love not war so not a sould would be hurt. Your poem was quite nice and made sense to me. Except Mr. Green seems not to be. Good luck in the contest I hope you win. If you don't it would be a sin. *heart* Papagallo


  • Desire gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    Oh My Word!!

    I swear there is not a form You are unable to do..
    Another Magnificent verse!!
    -takes out autograph book-
    Jeff Green was a legend, in his own mind
    Jeff came from England, land across the sea
    Jeff loved the girls or so he was inclined
    Writing little pearls in his poetry
    Love the rhyme~ and Fantastic piece
    dedicated to one Fantastic person from what
    I have read I'm Happy to see he quite
    enjoyed this too
    Woooooooooooo Hooooooooooo
    Keep that quill dancing Beautiful!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • PerVirtuous
    April 22, 2008

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    Sonnets will never be the same. I didn't barf at the sonnet, but the picture had me throwing up in my mouth little bit. Very cute.


  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    April 22, 2008

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    Jeff, you must laugh at this!!! Amera, well done once agian! I love the Multisyllabic iambic Sonnet, It seems really complicated, but a smart girl like you do this in a blink of an eye! All the best for the contest and I bet you will get a shiny trophy for your page (:

    LOVELY!!

    Becks


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 22, 2008

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    It's almost deliberately bad, and so it's very good, Sis (if that makes sense). And very funny

    Lots and lots of bunnies.


    • Amera gold member
      April 22, 2008
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      hehe...


      • cricketjeff gold member
        April 22, 2008
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        I didn't notice the error!!!
        I'm a Jeffrey not a Jeffery


        • Amera gold member
          April 22, 2008
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          The syllable count in the couplet is way off. I sacreficed it for meter.

          • cricketjeff gold member
            April 22, 2008
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            Meter matters more than beans

            (Ducks Mairi)



            Of course had it been a Multisyllabic iambic nothing Penfold Sonnet it would have been better still


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 21, 2008
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    This was well penned. Thanks for sharing.
    Love
    passions


  • Trinity Dragon
    April 21, 2008
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    Rhyme, yeah. Good job and good luck here.


  • StarEyes
    April 21, 2008

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    This is a cute humorous one, left me chuckling! I am always amazed at what you do...

    Best of luck in this contest!!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 21, 2008
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    I am humbled!!!!



    I now have two Amera sonnets to treasure, and treasure them both I shall, thank-you kind lady, you are our Queen, and more than that, a poet!

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