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Sing Me A Song





Sing me a song
of days of old-

where helping
your neighbor,
was the norm,

and laughter
rang in everyone's ear-

Sing me a song,
of days of old-

where loving
each other
was the norm-

and lover's
still held hand.

where speaking
your mind was accepted...

tell me how;
oh sing me a song
of days of old.

where a  smile
was there
for no reason at all-

where men were men,
and women were women
and they knew how
to talk to each other..

where rainbows
were golden,
and love filled the air
.

oh, sing me a song
of days of old.



 

 

 

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  • tomisb
    June 10, 2008

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    Lovely paean. But oft' the old now better than the new except for what memory creates. Given the skills you demonstrate in painting a picture of romantic grace, you should be able to create about yur loving heart a world that calls to you and which you wish to be part.
    Love, Tom B.,


  • nilav
    June 9, 2008
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    nostalgia for the good old days is expressed with the smooth flow of words....nice poem


  • Desire gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    Beautiful!!

    Oh My this is a Beauty of a piece
    The emotions and images stain the Heart also Mind
    Love this!!

    tell me how;
    oh sing me a song
    of days of old.

    where a smile
    was there
    for no reason at all-
    Love these lines~~

    and that background too
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Amera gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    This is great! Were days really like that or is it just that we were younger then and it seemed so? Well done!

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • cindy4
    April 22, 2008
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    Great write.

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