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A Gift Of Life

No matter your age,
life has now reached
a different
stage

Push your nerves away
a gift from the heavens
has arrived to
stay

Mom and Dad will be surprised
but this is no time
to tell
lies

All will be fine
until the baby is born
then all you here are
whines

Be strong, and you will
for this was meant to be
no regrets just memories
still

You are young with a new gift
so plan all out well
the day of arrival will be
the biggest
lift

No other will compare
so forget who may
give you wrong
stares

You have been blessed from above
growing fast within
is your true
love...

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    Newborns and their legacy

    For the children becoming adults in their minds too fast often dont listen to the warnings of their parents .They fall for the I love yous and the handsome guys within their grasps yet not adult enough to see the lies they are telling them .Now you become a mother as a teen and all the life that was before you to learn about life is now pushed aside for the new baby within your arms now depends on you and your wisdom to see them through . When you decided to make love did you tell yourself at that moment your teen years would be gone and you would become a mother to care and love this beautiful baby . Oh I cry for the chidren today for their parents let them run free and without the proper guidance to see their teen years through before they start a family of their own.


  • Alittle2lost
    April 21, 2008
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    That's beautiful. Thank you. Well penned.
    Thanks for entering and good luck!