alarmed by the
hatred of another
world of unknown
origin, the
frightened boar
squealed for a
low admittance
to safety
secured by the
rosy reports
of all known
areas, the
human band of
faith mongol's
opened the
door to hope
all was then
conquered by
simple beliefs
and trust
Author notes
prompt:
Fear knocked at the door
Faith answered
Nobody was there
20 lines
A contest entry
- 20-20-20 Quote Prompt Contest #3 PIF by BluesMan.
900 points, ended May 12, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Faith conquers all, it's much easier to open the door of uncertainty when you have a power greater than your self answering the door with you. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
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Interesting
Very Interesting take on the prompt. This piece really made my mind stir!
all was then
conquered by
simple beliefs
and trust
Nice Job
And best of luck to you in the contest
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