Utter senseless thoughts
While holding the rope he bought
Spindle life’s messes
Cling to the rope, for it sweetly caresses
Tie the knots tightly, dear
For death is near
Suspend from a highly place, love
For you shall be dangling from above
Place the knot ‘round your flesh
The scene you will leave they will never forget
Think peaceful last thoughts and whispers words so sweet,
As gravity is swept away from your weary feet
Close your eyes, forever to sleep
Your fondest dreams you shall always keep
The burn of rope cuts into your broken neck
Your open heart bleeding from dissect
As you melodically swing
Like a bird with a torn wing
Your hands stain with your life’s blood that you have taken
And your life as you lived has not been forsaken
Hanging from a tightly woven chain
Bounded tightly, made the skin stinging from pain
And this back bird finds peace from excuse
From the dangling of a special noose
A contest entry
- tears, fears, and everything inbetween by nobodys-girl.
700 points, ended May 4, 2008, 55 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Suicide\Depressing\Dark by SilverWolf.
375 points, ended September 12, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me more! by ASmileForYou.
700 points, ended January 7, 69 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I am completely in love with this. Like seriously.
"The scene you will leave they will never forget
Think peaceful last thoughts and whispers words so sweet,
As gravity is swept away from your weary feet"
Amazing. Captivating. Preliminary Finalist.
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this is dark and very awesome!
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hi sis
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so dark and it paints a picture so vivid it gave me shivers. i loved it. thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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I like the rhyming and the rythm! It is a very good, and darkly beautiful piece. I hope you have good luck in the contest. Best wishes love! Later.
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