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Defeated in Affection

Defeated in Affection

Isolated in shame
She binds to hope
Shrouded in veils of despair
Wading affection cannot bend
Defeated unto the end

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Quote Prompt: No matter how hard she tries, no matter how much she cares, she's always a failure in the end - Rose Dark Thorn

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  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    April 21, 2008

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    Exactly how I feel at the moment, and oh so fitting of the prompt.

    I know you may be wondering what's wrong, but I'd rather not talk about it.

    Thanks for entering.

    • DDsithstriker
      April 21, 2008
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      Its okay Rose, your feelings and emotions are your own. You know I'm always here if you want to talk, I always have a open ear.

      Justin