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Ice Lagoon

I jumped as I heard a large CRACK!
Circling the Lagoon, I saw a dark shadow,
Every thing went black...

Light poured down on me as I got up on the Ice Lagoon,
As always I slipped,
Getting up for a second time I realized something was watching me,
Oof! Something held me and I saw it was a Yeti,
Old friends of the Yeti huddled around me, 
Now I always go back to the Ice Lagoon.

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  • DawnKestrel
    May 28, 2008

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    Wow.
    Good luck in my contest!