I will always remember your face,
a look of sadness and despair. I
wish I could have known how deep
your pain was. I wish I could have
saved you! People always say that it
wouldn't have made a difference but
I guess now we shall never know! You
were a caring man full of love in your
heart. I wish I could have made her
love you and maybe you would still be
here, with your red hair and sparkling
blue eyes as a gift to the world! I wish
I could have know that night that you
would take your life, instead of two weeks
later when I could do nothing but cry and
wish with all my heart that I could turn
back the wheels of time! Would it make
a difference? I'll never know... I'll
never know! But I will always wonder....
Author notes
Dedicated to my friend Robert! He will be sorely missed!
died : September 5th 2007
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He looked like a really handsome guy. There is nothing you could do for him in life, butyou offer this wonderful tribute for him now that he is at peace. Bravo.
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This was a beautiful tribute, and I am sorry about your friend. I am not so sure that it fit with the prompt of this contest, but it is still a welcome addition to any other contest where it does fit. Please keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more...
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this is really sad about your friend
im sorry sis
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oh, i am so sorry to hear this about your friend
this is a touching tribute
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Aww this is so sad... I'm sorry for your loss, not sure what else to say to you... I hope you feel better because that is the only thing you can still do and I know a good friend would want you to feel good, even if you do miss him a lot. Thank you for such a touching entry.
~Diana
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