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the Bridge to Survival

Ordinary woman...me,
Till cancer called
And rocked my world.

Someone offered
a hand of hope
And a healing stream of
magic words,
"There's something that
outshines ordinary;
We'll find it as we
cross this bridge together."

A short walk...
Ordinary woman turned survivor...

looking back...

holding out a hand

for the next ordinary woman.

Author notes

This was for my grandparents who died . They didnt die of cancer but they passed away and i remember them everyday . R.I.P

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    March 18
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    Thanx 4 entering. Good luck! - cgirl0410


  • Snowing Kisses gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    This is a sensational write of hope and inspiration
    A short walk
    Ordinary woman turned survivor
    looking back
    Holding out her hand
    For the next ordinary woman
    A really excellent closure to a superb write
    The gold was much deserved


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    Wonderful poem. And it takes extrodinary women, to help those who only think they're ordinary. Thank you for the entry.


  • Deformed Duck
    October 17, 2008
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    This is sweet. I liked it alot!


  • afroqban
    October 14, 2008
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    omg talk about deep. very well written, i love it


  • Sandygram silver member
    May 1, 2008

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    A wonderful and heartfelt poem. I lost my mom to cancer and I appreciate your thoughtful words here. You take care.

    Bless You,
    Aunt Sandy


  • PoEtRyInMe
    April 21, 2008

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    Sweet

    This was very sweet. I like it a lot thanks for supporting the cause!

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