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The Alphabet Mouse

The mouse runs around the kitchen,
He smells the delicious cheese,
Every time he gets caught by that tabby cat.

All the time it waits,
Licking it's lips, trying to taste that sweet tasting mouse,
Practicing on the sofa,
He scratches it, bites it until he feels he has practiced enough,

Always spying on that mouse,

Before he slams down his paw,
Every time that mouse is close to death,
This time that Tabby cat will get it.

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By Maximum

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  • The Doctor
    June 15, 2008
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    Wow!!!! I think this is the best poem I've read yet. Good luck.


  • islekine gold member
    April 24, 2008
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    This is great!

    I hope you win too! Best wishes in the contest.
    Write on and on!
    *PEACE*


  • DawnKestrel
    April 22, 2008
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    Please add username!

  • DawnKestrel
    April 21, 2008

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    Brilliant! You used both riddle answers perfectly!
    Good luck in the contest! ^_^

    But please change the background to a non-custom made one!