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Just a girl

I'm just a girl
with child bearing hips
just a girl
with semi chapped lips
just a girl
with life growing inside
just a girl
times not on my side
a girl too soon to become a woman
a girl with a child...
a girl soon to become a mother
I'm just a girl
what can I say
just a girl
with a little girl
growing inside me
each day

Author notes

I don't know if its a girl...just a feeling. I find out friday!

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  • Hate-And-Pain
    May 7, 2008
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    A great poem simple honest and true. Well done and congrats on expecting


  • Mozarts funeral gold member
    May 7, 2008

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    This is a great poem! Not to mention it made me think of No Doubts song " I'm just a girl" I'm so excited for you! :-)


  • QuietPort
    April 22, 2008

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    This write really got to me. It was so sweet and pure Keep up the good writes and good luck in the
    contest. Congratulations on expecting as well!
    Thanks for sharing