Touch so gentle,
Feelings of pleaure,
Give in to the bliss.
*Be mine.*
Author notes
thirteen words are hard lol hope u like my short poem
the be mine is a whisper. just so everyone knows
A contest entry
- quickie - pif - DARK by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended April 21, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like this short and sweet and to the point. Good job at presenting your writing. Peace be with you! -
:) great Blitz
Wow great job. ((short comment for a short poem.
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very nice poem. short, sweet, and to the point. loved it
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very sad, but beautiful at the same time. With hope of love.
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luv it
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oh baby...I love you so much and this is so wonderful
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