If truth brings sorrow
then bless me with lies;
I'd rather die happy.
Author notes
prompt 3. Drown me in sorrow and bless me with lies. - x Empathic Rose x
13 words weren't really enough for this prompt but I managed to get the essence of what I wanted to say here.
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Hmmm, I think you have taken this line of mine to a whole new simple level, though I like it - it'e easy to understand and easy to relate to.
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Thanks I did have a longer one in mind but I managed to get it within the word limit and keep the heart of it; so to speak.
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