I met one pretty elfin maid
Amera was her name
Weaver of words like silken braid
Poetry is her fame
Her magic pen, brings much delight
Illuminates the darkest night
Her magic pen
Her magic pen
Erases shadows from our sight
I met one pretty elfin maid
I feared her words were dreams
Yet in awe and wonder I stayed
Amidst her thoughtful streams
She casts her spell, without a sound
Her resourcefulness does astound
She casts her spell
She casts her spell
As raving masses gather 'round
I met one pretty elfin maid
Who loved the children so
She prayed for all babes to be laid
In arms that hold no woe
The time will come, it will be known
She will hold a babe of her own
The time will come
The time will come
More poetic seeds will be sown
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Author notes
"Happy Anniversary" you two!!! I hope this will suit the purpose... I did try Allan, to capture your Ameras wonderous elf self... cia ~ Note: Background is by The Madman... alias ~ ebpoetry
A contest entry
- Happy Anniversary Amera! by PerVirtuous.
3000 points, ended April 25, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Impressed Amera expressed
I read some poems, I looked around
I like your site, your words are sound
with that been said, I'll waste no time
if its okay, I'll make you mine...
Faverite that is, did I spell that right?
I cannot spell, as you can tell
but I ryhme okay, and would like to say
have a great contest, and an awesome day..
rudolf
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Precious!!
Oh My You have weaved a Beauty and captured this elfin maid with style also grace!
Love the form You framed this in and the border to compliment!!
I have yet to try this~You & Amera have Inspired me to give it a whirl~
Magnificent!!
I did not see who had entered initially or I would have come by sooner
Congratulations on Your HM!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wonderful
What a great creation for a great lady. You expressed it so well. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh my! I am so honored, you have me speechless. This is truly a wonderful Trijan Refrain and you make me look so much better than I am. There aren't enough superlatives to tell you how much I love this. It goes in my treasure room.
Love,
Amera♥
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A beautiful gift for a gifted poetess. How could she NOT love this. Wonderfully done. Best of luck in this contest. ~Pamela
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This is so ethreral and a pleasant opposite of some the polital and social parity written by myself and other authors.
Thanks for sharing.
John
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What a beautiful write as usual from you. Seems as if writen for and about someone in particular...but could just as well been someone writing about you. Truly neautiful as always and best wishes in the contest,
Evan
oops..lookin below, sems as if someone else thinks the same of you so it isnt my madness...lol
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A finely wrought and marvelous tribute to a gifted poet! Most excellent in every way! bravo.. bravo.... bravo..
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This is a wonderful write for her!!! I am sure that it will put a beautiful smile on her face!!! This was very well written and your word choice delightful!! Best of luck here,,,,,
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I know a pretty poet
Ithica is her name
Weaver of words .......................joe
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Beautiful
And I know the poet you speak of . She has beauty and talent for sure. And you my lady have done her justice. Write on gal
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