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About Me

I fly as cold as ice,
I have to fly,
Fly,
Fly,
Fly.


I am on the run,
I'm being hunted by THE ERASERS.


The Erasers are half wolf half man,
I have to fly away quickly.

I cannot say goodbye,
I have to run,
I hope I hear from you.

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  • pukingrainbows
    April 21, 2008

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    this is good but i'd really like to read some poems that are from your head instead of from the series it's a good series but it shouldn't be the base for poems i'd really like too read a more complex poem that has meaning."i hope hear from you" would be a good lead for a poem i'm not saying you have to take my advise but i think it would be helpful.i look forward to reading more of your work.


  • Dygurl
    April 21, 2008
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    interesting write


  • DawnKestrel
    April 21, 2008

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    Cool poem!
    I suppose you are talking about Maximum Ride, aren't you? Still, another great poem! ^_^