Alone in a world so big,
Having dreams of something
That doesn't seem real to me at all...
Having a family is the most
Important thing a person can have
Or at least that is what I hear...
Whether they be big or small every one
needs a loving father, sister, or mom...
I stand here on the beach,
sending out wishes of how it would be,
If I had a loving family..
If I didn't feel so lonely..
Watching each wave come into shore
Feeling like the world is sinking in
On all of my hopes and dreams of
one day having my own family..
If I could wish on a star and know that it
Would really come true..
I would wish that my life would be better,
wish that I could find someone who,
Could love me for who I am,
Pull me out of this world
That feels like it's sucking me down..
If I could wish for one thing, and one thing alone..
I would wish for a family of my own..
I would wish for a mother to hold me close,
When I am in fear.. I would wish for a Father,
Who would smile at my funny ways and always be such a dear..
I would wish for a sister who would let me come into her room
And tell me all about love and doom..
I would wish for a brother, one who knows
that when I am quiet I am hurting, when I
am running then to run after me, a brother who
Would not be afraid to wipe my tears away...
Standing here by the sea,
watching the waves crashing
On this beautiful shore..
I would kneel down and pray..
"Please.. All I really want is a
Beautiful family.. Because I am just
so tired of being lonely..."
Alone in a world so big,
Having dreams of something
That doesn't seem real to me at all...
Author notes
well it's not the best I know, but I'm still recovering from writers block!!..lol..
Whatever you would like me to be.. I am fine with.. well kind of.. I WILL NOT BE AN ANIMAL!!!lol.. I am human hear me...something..lol.
A contest entry
- Please adopt me on AP by Folklor.
525 points, ended April 21, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww
Ohhh this is just so touching and amazing!!
Oh yay... MJ is your AP Father then... how wonderful!
I'd love you to be part of my AP family!
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I'm glad that you liked it! and MJ is another Ap daddyo for me here on Ap.. Mark is my other one
I would love to have you in my AP family!!!
J.
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YAY for Mark and Michael!
YAY for being in your family...
What shall we be? lol -
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well... what would you like to be!? lol.. sister, Tia(aunt), mother..lol.. it's up to you really! lol..I'm just glad that my AP family is growing really big! lol.
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Hmmm well I'm almost twice your age.. but would love to be a Big Sis
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then Big Sis you are!!! welcome to the family sister mine!!!
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awwww ive adopted you as my sis... oh hugs hun... lovely words... Iwish for these things for you too.. keep strong... and hugs and hugs and hugs...
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Hey sister mine!! thank you very much for the hugs ...lol. I know that one day I will have these things too..
thanks for your comment..
Jetleena
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"If I could wish for one thing, and one thing alone..
I would wish for a family of my own..
I would wish for a mother to hold me close,
When I am in fear.. I would wish for a Father,"
This was so touching...may I be your AP father dear?
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this is really good
i love you
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i love it it is very self explanitory
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That poem touched me,
It's beautiful
An there's a lot of feeling in it
Well done,
x
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honorable winner? this shouldve made gold, its sad, i feel alone alot of times too
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Yes, a touching write. Evokes the hugs of any reader. I give you mine too. Know that happiness doesn't lie in finding others, it is nurtured from within. Once you love yourself, the world will love you back...alby
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family are the ones youve known the longest :D
love the touching deep openess of this write.. remember always to "be the love you seek"
love always.. teddybare
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Excellent
You will have your family my friend. You will be a great mother when the time comes. Do not rush it, it will happen for you
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this is a beautiful poem well done I love the sea imagery its my favorite place to be and the way you say you want a family of your oen seems so heart felt its great.
lol n dw you wont be an anima
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