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Completely

If I gave you my heart
Gave it to you whole
Completely
What would you do?
What would you say?

If you knew that I loved you
Only you
Completely
What would you do?
What would you say?

If I told you I trust you
I believe you
Completely
What would you do?
What would you say?

If you know you finish me
Make me whole
Completely
What would you do?
What would you say?

If I asked you to me mine forever
Only mine
Completely
What would you do?
What would you say?

Author notes

eh... it sucks... so ... yeah

*ish in love*

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  • Dead Star--x
    April 21, 2008
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    awww
    *points at laughs at you*
    youre in love

    <3


    • Gorgeous Nightmare.
      April 22, 2008
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      *slaps Ze Sarah* No making fun of me. ily♥ you are not too nice to me sometimes. what did I ever do to you?


  • SomeonesToySoldier
    April 21, 2008

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    It does not suck Sarah. Its pretty good. And as far as an answer goes. Only your lover can answer that sort of questions because only he knows how your love makes him feel.


  • Painful Memories
    April 21, 2008

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    i would say i love you i need you can't be without you. Don't leave me be with me. And i will prove everything else