Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Pink Dahlia

Pink dahlia
Whets the appetite's eye of glossing thought
a bubble catches this lovely flower's garden Pop
Pink

Your pink gummy eyes feel flayed
Soften them on this soft pink plume
Its pink petals circling like tongues
streaked upon the pedals of drawn back desire
Brush its edges with your lips
Wet Kiss
its pink lipstick shine soothes the sting of eye and mind
bite down a bit on your lip

Draw it down
Cup it in your hand this Pink dahlia
follow its tender curls
Lay the soft underside upon your taut tummy
below your ticklish belly button
Smile
They are free
To you me and the dahlia makes three

For raise it up
sink your teeth into it a touch
hot pink
light blushes its insulating
ruddy edges
Pink
catch this flower mid-morn
at no cost but a slight sigh and a wink

Pink dahlia

Author notes

May be another one coming. Dahlia II or some such.

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Nicole Hanna
    March 16
    Edit | Reply
    .


  • Cant force beloved
    February 21

    Edit | Reply
    I would like to see Dahlia number two.


  • lalainya rising
    April 22, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Very nice.

    Lots of good metaphor and image put in there.

    "They are free
    To you me and the dahlia makes three"

    "For raise it up
    sink your teeth into it a touch"

    Nice lines here.