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Feel Me

Feel me?

Why don't you?

Why can't you feel me?

I'll keep you occupied


If you really felt

knowing, is loving me

Be no hesitation

No mistaken identity

You would be able to recognize

Falsified records forging my

signature

I won’t be dirt lodging

It’s all or nothing, numero uno

You know

Thinking I knew you

Here, know me

See on earth you have always been

My King Guru

My other King is not of this world

but you running down the same vein

I shout it until it curls and rest nurturing the cracks

of my palms then I stroke it

So stroke me

Sometimes speaking confidentially in other tongues

Sometimes in Swahili because it’s the

language of true royalty

I use what I use to pay homage to that

long over due

Regardless of who is trying to ensue

Always we be the natural Queens

Rearing up offspring

Of the likes we’ve never seen

Yet they call us on the sly

Mother of their birth

Call out my name receiving my girth

Another matron

Another patron but she be calling me

Down low and on the sly

Looking at me to clothe them

Looking at me to match them

Looking at me to build on their physique

On me it’s O naturale

It’s my milk you should seek

Yes, don’t you understand I feed the universe?

I’m the fleshy parts of Alpha and the Omega

The brown laureate trampling through ruins

Knee deep in the struggle for you

There’s nothing greater

than the fact we’ve suffered in the days

behind heinously

Now study that we survived is partly thanks to me

Look back now and marvel

at the resilience of the family tree

Feel me

I aim to satisfy

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  • Kiran silver member
    April 23, 2008
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    This was an amazing poem, full of depth. A stunning piece, well done with this.

  • blakangell
    April 22, 2008
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    omg

    that was amazing. A very deep poem. Keep up the GREAT work


  • lightswitches
    April 22, 2008

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    WOW!!!!
    there is a mirage of drum beats that ensues when I read your poems. I get picked up by the first beat and it lets me down softly on the last.
    Good job! You are probably really humble, but I have to say you are one of the most accomplished poets.

    .. In response. I know that butterflies can be campy, however, it was a metahpor, but you already knew that didn't you.
    .. I have looked back on poems of old, and all that I can do is laugh at some of them (or most of them). A lot of them are either moody, or a really obvious political message resonates. However, that was my first time with butterflies.

    Keep the poems coming
    here are three little applauding little guys


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    April 21, 2008

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    Absolutely Loved the Flow here...

    as usual you bring it!
    This is awesome and I am so glad I got a chance to read this.

    Keep doin you Satin great Collabo.

    Ephiphany