i woke up from such a pleasant dream.
you and i finally together.
it was so real.
i swear my first concious breathe was laced with your scent.
i kept my eyes close holding on to the dream.
rolling over i know that i could feel the warmth from your body on my sheets.
when i finally opened my eyes to bring the dream to reality your presence was absent.
i longed to cry.
i closed my eyes.
trying to capture the dream.
tears fall.
my body awaiting for your embrace.
your kiss.
your love.
the dream gone.
your gone.
and i know i need your love to live the day.
Author notes
i dont have an ap family myself would love to join yours. you can have me as anything you want.
signed happy lil koneko! (koneko is kitten is japanese). =^.^=
A contest entry
- Please adopt me on AP by Folklor.
525 points, ended April 21, 2008, 7 entries
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Comments
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Very groovy
If you control your life you are able to dream anything,
If you can control your dreams, your life becomes how you shape it.
Neko §
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Interesting flow, I think it works well with the poem! It is a sad realization when you open your eyes to discover it was all a dream... sigh
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wow this is an interesting poem. I love the short sharp lines and the repetition of gone, emphasising the word and feeling of emptyness.
well Koneko welcome to my family,you can either be a sister or a feline companion seeing as your name is kitten in japanese : -
Dreams are such a fickle thing. The despair of realization after such a wonderful dream is a lot for one to bear. When we're together, dreams will be nothing compared to the waking world...
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