Beneath a pallet of purple and blue
your beauty reflects in the river of my soul
A breath of tranquility caresses my heart
wrapping me in natures perfection
Engrossed in her sweet song
I lose myself in her mystical melody
Sat within a painting created by my creator
Enjoying the moment
Void of all thoughts
I'm at peace
Author notes
All images copyright Michael Anderson 2007, Lightscape Photography, LLC. Lightscapephoto.com
A contest entry
- NATURE PHOTO PROMPT #70 by Roaddog Wolf.
475 points, ended April 25, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Contentment by z etoile.
300 points, ended July 15, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very peaceful write
"yourbeauty reflects in the river of my soul."
I loved that line thank you for entering the contest.
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get a very calming feeling from your words, " I loose myself in her mystical melody" very nice
thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest
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Thank you for your comment
Valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Sat within a painting created by my creator
Enjoying the moment
Void of all thoughts
I'm at peace
beautiful good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for reading and commenting
valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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What a place to find yourself to be at peace within the beauty of this setting nature has produced for our pleasure and enjoyment ...finding the unity and blending ... a little tree hugging goes a long way to soothing the soul. Great take on the pronpt...thank you for the pleasure. Good luck in the contest.
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Thank you for your lovely comment
valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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Ok...ok...
now I'm feeling the new flow sis
Very intrigueing, as you ponder thru this enchanting piece. Great flow, love the words used in this.
All the best in the contest,
I love it.
E
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Thank you Piff
Always a pleasure to recieve your comments.
~sugar~
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You seem inspired
This is very different for you. Good use of multiple poetic devices. A poem of nature that you connected with. Mystical and spiritual, if there was a way I'd give you more than three applaudin' bunnies. Well done, Michelle
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I'm feeling happy...spring has finally arrived with her blessing. I value and appreciate you reading and commenting. Always a pleasure to read them.
Love ~sweetness~ x
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A VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE, INDEED - FROM A VERY BEAUTIFUL WOMAN!
Good luck in this contest with this colorful piece! Aren't the colors of Mother Nature inspiring and marvelous, indeed? Thanks for sharing this one with me on a sunny and colorful spring Monday - where I have been blessed to see man birds and bees - ant the yellows, lilacs, reds, greens, and pinks - of the buds on the trees and of the blossoming flowers - that I could marvel at and meditate upon for hours!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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Thank you sweetie...spring is in the air and I am feeling blessed...my garden is coming to life with a multitude of colours...me birds are back. Life is good.
Thank you for your wonderful comment always a pleasure to read and much appreciated.
Love you ~sugar~ xxx
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Very very beautiful writing here. Very tranquil and the words just flow and I lose myself within them. This is stunningly-beautiful.
Love
Wayne Leon
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The image was beautiful, you could lose yourself in it. Thank you for your lovely comment, they are always a pleasure to read.
Love ~sugar~xx
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Pretty
Very pretty words here sis. That image had to be beautiful. Fine work, again.
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Cheers bro, it is a beautiful image
Click on to the contest to see it
appreciate you reading and commenting
Love your sis ~sugar~
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