I closed the door,
The night creeping in around me,
My heart pounding.
I kept waking up.
My heart in pain,
I screamed,
My mind was playing tricks
Untill it was to late.
It was always following me,
The shadows,
The dark,
But now I've seen it all.
I can't take it in,
This is the worst,
It's unfair,
And now it's coming for me.
I've heard about it from Doctor who,
I thought it was all make believe,
But I was wrong,
It's the Vakshenarada.
A contest entry
- Absolutely Anything (No Adult Themes) by DawnKestrel.
550 points, ended June 3, 2008, 77 entries
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Well done
Well done -
Well done
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Nice job!
Good luck in my contest! -
i like this, great imergery, flt like i was there, but it feels unfinished.
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Very goo - simple words,short but effective, great write - especially for your age group - i spot talent
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Yes, short poems quite often has a good impact.
Keep up the good work!!!
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This was a really great write.. short but it had a great impact.. well done!!
Jetleena
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Very good!!!
And very emotional. I felt how you felt while you were writing this.
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Outstanding
Amazing
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