The Life of a relationship becomes bitter
Once the life of an innocent soul starts to quiver
what's left of a mind that's been played with?
Emotionally scared and bruised
feeling like my heart was being used
The honesty of the things I've told you
wasn't the kind of thing I would do
I gave you the tenderness of my soul to carry
that you held from time to time briefly
Disdainful thoughts and lost dignity
wouldn't have been possible with self-Nobility
It's obvious to me that you don't care
for this agony that I bare
Though so much has been said through this silence
I can see that it's written on your face and it's in your voice
that I'm Your Faded Memory
Please tell me what you think
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GOOD
Oh I love this! I really love this! This is wonderfully written! I love how you used the
Positive and the Negative in here, a balance.. Fabulous!
Nicely written
and thanks so much for sharing this poem.
Glenn

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Amazing!!
Dude!!! this is soo fucking beautiful and deep... man i really really like this, its your best yet... keep up the good work!!!



