A
Blue emerald
Falling from the sky,
Whispering to the world as
Time goes by as fast as a fly can fly,
An everlasting raindrop touching the ground,
A raindrop of love, a raindrop of life
To fast or to slow time will tell,
But as time goes by passes
A lover by and as the raindrop dies
it passes love to peoples eyes
Good bye dear raindrop
We will miss you
For an eternity
As we wither
To
Die.
A contest entry
- Absolutely Anything (No Adult Themes) by DawnKestrel.
550 points, ended June 3, 2008, 77 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Etheree? It's very nice, whatever it is. I like the idea of the raindrop passing love to people's eyes. Then if dwindles off in a way that matches the dwindling words.
Both upbeat and
deflating. Con-
grats on
your
HM.
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Wow.
Good luck in my contest! -
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this is a beautiful writeand I really love the detail as well as the form that you have chosen to use for this piece. it has a mixed feeling of emotions within it which really captures the readers thoughts leaving them considering and pondering within your words. well done
Charlotte
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Brilliant!!!!!
A very good first poem on allpoetry.com!!! ^_^
I hope you put up even more poetry!! I hope it's as good as this one!!! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^
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