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[ I can't help this feeling, ]

I can't help this feeling,
I've changed for the better.
I'm sorry but its over,
this is my last letter.

I can't stand this,
you bringing me down.
Your life is pretty good,
and my happiness you drowned.

But now it's back,
and ready to fight.
Because I remember the time,
my very first night.

The first time I hurt,
the first time I tried.
I said I was happy,
but that was a lie.

So i'm better off without you,
better off alone.
Hopefully another will come,
so more love seeds are sewn.

You're out of my life now,
but something still goes wrong.
Why is it hurt,
and blood I still long?

I made a mistake,
and the guilts too much,
I walk to the kitchen,
and that knife I do clutch.

This is my life,
so I prey to die.
Because when I said I didn't love you...
Thats was another lie.

Be gentle.

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  • XScreamMeALoveSongx
    April 25, 2008

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    "This is my life,
    so I prey to die.
    Because when I said I didn't love you...
    Thats was another lie."
    that is amazing, i loved it! =)
    xXx-xXx

  • razorbladz
    April 21, 2008
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    this is awsome if only shane knew it


  • lovexinxcoldxblood
    April 21, 2008
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    Oh

    I so love this poem!


  • Poison-Kisses
    April 21, 2008
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    i love this poem, its very emotional and something alot of people can relate too.

  • lovelonleyness888
    April 21, 2008
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    verygood

    i love this one its so true

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