I finally got the cou[rage] to go through with it
Of course by now youve found me
Dead, laying on the floor
Tear stained face with mascara trails, limbs sprawled out and colored purple/blue, and wrists cut deep with blood all over
Last thing you notice is the smile on my face- a true smile
I smile because I am finally happy for once
You say to yourself "I shoulda saw the signs" and "she needed help and Im too late",
but truth is that there was no help for me and noone couldve changed my mind
Dont cry for me- I dont want pity, I never did
...Hey Brian, guess I'll see you in hell like you said
A contest entry
- Pain You Can't Explain And More by BlackBloodyRose.
499 points, ended May 22, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Suicide Notes by XXxXBassMeisterxXxX.
450 points, ended August 2, 2008, 14 entries
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FINALLY! this is what i was looking for. I really enjoyed reading it and i think that i have to read it again.... matter of fact I will. I just did. I like how you wrote cou{rage] I know tist it and was like I have never seen that before. I liked it. Matter of fact i think i loved it. great write.
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! im so glad u liked it, 
thanks so much!
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very nice
i like this. i like how u make people see that there were signs and they just didn't get the help the person needed. very good -
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thank you hun. exactly n tht seems to be the case most of the time.
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Emotional
I hope this never happens. Very powerful write my friend
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thanks. it wont i was just really sad when i wrote it.
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strong
very strong. i like the description in this piece. very very well writen thought out well. good work
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thank you dear
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Wow! Well I guess doing something like that you would see the other person in hell that's for sure. This was dark, and the imagery in this piece was really good. A couple of grammer corrections should be done but nothing major. If you would like to know what they are then let me know!
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thanks 4 the applause.
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he SO isnt worth that but wow. incredibly strong and powerful write.. it was awesome
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he aint worth that
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but you dont kno him
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No matter if you're a boy or girl, no one is worth dying for. Thats my opinion take it for what it's worth. I was in somewhat same position few years back.
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its a good opinion. thanks babe
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