Its wild how magical it is tonight
Everything’s icy and still
The whole world is holding its breath
As we crunch through the softness
Hand in hand.
The purple-grey sky is a bedspread
and the world sleeps beneath
with sugar-plum branches
and sugar-snow icing
that frosts everything
miraculous.
The minced ice-sugar
sifts down
catching my eyelashes as I look up to
the air turns our breath to iciness as you lean in
and your hand is warm in mine.
Its wild how mistical you are tonight
As we lay here so close and so still
I feel your touch and I’m holding my breath
As we gaze to the future
Hand in hand.
Twisted here in this blanket
wrapped tight in your arms beneath.
The touch of your skin
the scent of your breath
suddenly everything’s
magical.
Your soft lips
graze mine
catching my eyelashes as I look down
the night dances with our breath as we bend forward
and your heart is warm next to mine.
Author notes
"ForeverLastingComa"
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Comments
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This is a very loving piece. Imagery is wonderful, you have painted such a beautiful picture. Thank you so much for entering.
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A very nice romantic piece
well crafted the style is it yours?
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest. -
This is so romantic,
You have done a good job.
Thank you for entering LoveNeverDies
Goodluck
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the words are unique but the meaning is a bit to vague, thank you for entering the contest and good luck
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aww..this is very sweet..gave me that warm feeling inside i liked this part
Its wild how mistical you are tonight
As we lay here so close and so still
I feel your touch and I’m holding my breath
As we gaze to the future
Hand in hand.
thank you for entering and good luck
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