Whimsy
reaches out
picks up the pen
creates a form of flora
with no known botanical name
Reason
takes a look
sees whimsy made
an awkward leaf or two
too late to intervene, whimsy done
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Author notes
Sometimes whimsy
starts to think
then free flowing line
goes on the blink.
Words come alive when answered in kind.
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Oh, this is good. I love the triangular form, it's very cute. Great write!
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Thank you!
Whimsy was in control.
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You are very creative. I love line drawing like this theres no doubt you captured whimsy to a T. lol
I wish I could draw as well as this, you make it look effortless yet I know I would stumble over this trying to make it look this good well done
Cyberartist
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Hi, Cyberartist!
It's the free spirit within
being released without constraint---
and without reason popping in
unwelcomed!
Aesthete
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They're similar to Tulips, Mumsy..
Only the petals must be longer and pointed.... hehehe 
Very nice.
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Hah--scrunchy tulips, summer?
Growing in the land of OZ...
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What a beautiful sketch Aesthete
you sweet whimsical woman
there is nothing awkward about it!
Let them keep poppin out! who hoo!
I love it.
hugs Moony
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Moony, moony! Good to see you!!!!!
Right, "reason" saw the two center leaves
as a bit stiff, but of course they need
to be a bit stiff or firm to hold their
shape on center stage!!!!
Hugs to you, Queen of whimsy and romance!!
M-C
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haha, i like this "whimsy" character... Two well formed stanzas (both in words and symmetry). who asked reason about their opinion anyway? you're drawing is beautiful!
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Why, thank you, loper!
Reason so often
has the upper hand.
Poets and writers well-served
to rely on "whimsy," allowing it
to speak through the subconscious!
Aesthete
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Whimsy wins, Yay! That is exactly what I root for...there's plenty of reality about, toss me a few flowers that grow simply in the imagination!
Nice artwork btw, and it's a create way to express your whimsical moments.
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Hey, Yem!
Liking the "Yay."
For some freedom is expressed
by riding a Harley withut a helmet,
or with one, for those valuing
life and head----but for me
the more accessible is the pen
in hand, fingers on the keys.
Can't compete with the
perfection of Nature's blooms;
don't like to be contrained by rules,
so I grow my own flowers on the page!
Aesthete
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this is so lovely, both are, poem and drawing.
When inspiration strikes, the best thing to do is to let it takes its own course...results are mostly more than we expect.
Am happy reason didn't stop the whimsy
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Thank you, Mari.
Yes, the subconscious
given its way
does not often
lead art sstray!
Aesthete
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You drew this?
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A few minutes ago,
akin to the other
line drawings on my pages,
they just want to pop out!
Aesthete
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