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Haiku - Aureate

 

A gentle aura
corresponds to warmth within
not facial flora
 

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Photo http://flickr.com/photos/chrysophylax/278217137/


http://flickr.com/photos/petit_pierrot/2368732170/sizes/o/


Background
http://flickr.com/photos/blondepowers/2212886344/sizes/o/

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  • Once Upon A Mind
    August 19

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    The backgroudn is a bit busy, but it makes it feel even more abstract than it already is - so in a way I guess I kind of like it that way as well!

    Such a great spiritual write Love the word aura

    Amber

  • crazymomma
    July 7

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    Hmmm..., I really enjoyed this even though I don't really know why. I like the imagery it created in my mind. A nice haiku. thanks for sharing. Also very cool pic and background

  • poetry is soul
    July 4

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    very good haiku... i love haikus... can never really write a good one, but i love to read them. and i like the picture with the dude and the ball... your background is pretty awesome too. good job!

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  • azure85 gold member
    April 23

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    A gentle aura
    corresponds to warmth within
    not facial flora

    This is an interesting haiku, I am thinking over your L3 moment, one to think about. Thank you so much.

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