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Haiku - A-Musing

Close your Eyes and Sleep
 

Mooning on spooning
bed tosses and turns, returns
ballooning dream tuning


 

 

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Picture Four Poster : Ketosea http://flickr.com/photos/ketosea/511861529/

Pic Dream Balloon
http://www.flickr.com/photos/rleffel/32105288/

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  • profmes
    June 28
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    garbage wrapped in flashing sparks

    Yer stuff is open to be turned inside over: pull your words' jam aside ye spooning moon!

  • azure85 gold member
    April 23

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    Mooning on spooning
    bed tosses and turns, returns
    ballooning dream tuning

    A haiku of interesting thoughts, I think you have a cool background. Thank you so much!


  • Kitesen
    April 22
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    a houray for the background with this poem. Nice tried but it doesn't fit to haiku rules although your syllable count seems to match (which is one of the least counting rules except that maximum of 17 within three lines) pick the information in the group Haiku and Tanka.