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To call a lost love

The roaring pain,
Along the peaceful lane,
Not one space for they're personal gain,

The craziness drives me insane,
Without you,
Nothing is the same.

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  • hansakalie
    April 22, 2008

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    I love this poem. I can feel your pain. this poem reminds me of my twin brother who died almost six years ago. Thank you for a wonderful piece of work.


  • lovemedeath
    April 21, 2008
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    awwwwwwww i love it.........powerful uses of feelings!!!! keep up good job