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Chain 17 Syllable Triplets.

meditate my friend
consider the pros and cons
'twixt pain and pleasure

medicate my friend
take one pill or several
to lessen the pain


mediate my friends
contemplate your argument
change pain to pleasure

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Chain 17 Syllable Triplets

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  • layla.
    April 26, 2008
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    i think meditation is a great way of escaping. i like this. good luck

  • Suzanne Dia
    April 23, 2008

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    Mediation is key.

    As is moderation, depending on the situation.

    I would suggest a different title, the current one, while it is nice to know the form here, doesn't seem to do justice to what you have written.

    I like this, though.