Submerged in a place of darknesS
Heartless memories hissing...hushhH
Abandoned, alone, a child in AmericA
Down with emotion, feelings to be damneD
Overcoming obstacles...when in your face this goes "boO!"
Whispering winds through your hair they sing a song and floW
Silently, sulking. Soul-lessly angered sadly mistaken, the past of my life, away it slipS.
A contest entry
- Mirror Acrostics by LanguishedLad.
950 points, ended April 23, 2008, 17 entries
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Comments
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Very creative in how you spelled out 'shadows'. Thank you for entering.
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this is great. keep on writing
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Great write and the best of luck
Sock -
aww, this is so sad
I hope you feel better...
I love love love your poem! It was great although it was sad
And I thought it was SO awesome how on both sides it spells shadows! That was really cool & it must have been hard to do!
GREAT!! -
Sad reality of life today for many....
I like what you did here!
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huhu
so sad... just talk to me... maybe i can help you..
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