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Honor the Night

Sun Rise Sun Set
Day to Night
Lives well met
Souls filled with might

On angel's wings
Eternity beacons
The multitude sings
Life passes in seconds

Unto night's call
Families wail
Tears fall
Saints hail

Life becomes death
Death becomes life
A foul breath
A bitter strife

Sun bows to the moon
Moon unto the Sun
The Pauper births a Silver Spoon
The tyrant falls before a gun

Answer thy calling
Kicking, screaming, crawling

Honor the Night

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  • VerminVomit
    April 26, 2008
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    i already commented *adds to finalist list*


  • Gypsie Ink
    April 22, 2008

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    Powerful!

    "The Pauper births a Silver Spoon
    The tyrant falls before a gun" I really like these lines. I like where it flows over the tongue. Provacative and Inspiring. I am blessed to have come across this piece and read it. Thank you

  • petycash
    April 21, 2008

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    Honor the night! Great piece of work here! Almost like a vicious circle. Nice images with a good flow. Awesome poem.


  • VerminVomit
    April 20, 2008

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    awesome

    theres nothing bad about this poem
    the 4th stanzas the best part
    i wish i could give more than 3 applauses...
    your poem is just so...awesome...