Mommy just so you know
If I'm not out yet
When you turn 21 dont drink
Dont get high with your friends
And most importantly dont hit my home
(A.K.A. Your tummy, because if you do something bad will happen)
Mommy you need to wake up
I'm hungry you need something in your tummy
So when you go to the doctor you'll be healthy
Just like me, Mommy
And please tell Grandma and Grandpa about me
I really wouldnt mind being spoiled when I get out
Mommy I think I'm getting fingernail
And my head kind of hurts
I think its growing...
Is that supposed to happen?
And I just now noticed
My room is red
I think I like this color.
Mommy I cant wait till I get out of here
And you actually get to hold me
Like you tell me you want to
And I cant wait to be your baby
I cant wait till you sing me to sleep everynight
And read to me books, like "The Giving Tree" by Shel Silverstein
And I cant wait to have you as a Mom
Because I know you're the best one out there
Mommy, I'm going to take a nap now
I'm kind of tired
Please dont forget what I told you
I love you Mommy
A contest entry
- A Good Reason To Hold A Contest... by Alittle2lost.
1000 points, ended May 4, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well??
Comments
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a good personification piece here, the baby lookign forward to life, treading the red room and waiting for breath
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So emotional!
I had tears in my eyes towards the end of this, I'm a mother myself and it really gives a different perspective on being pregnant.It seemed like such an effortless write, well done, I love this, you've stirred up all kinds of emotions I can't even begin to describe.
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that's adorable. well written.
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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