One night i heard the fridge open
I got up to see why
I looked down an guess who was there
Mr.Teddy acting all shy
I told him not to be shy
I asked him if he wanted a sandwhich
We put pickles and mustard and jam
And also rib-eye and mamwhich
Author notes
it was based on storys my dad used to write about the teddy bear he gave me named Mr.Teddy\ "ForeverLastingComma"
A contest entry
- I'm in the mood for ANYTHING! by ForeverLastingComa.
550 points, ended April 25, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
who puts all this on there sandwhich?
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awww this is soooo CUTE! =p..may want to read over for spelling though =) nice write good luck in my contest
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That is great that your dad writes you stories, and I like your poem very much. It made me smile and it combined two of my favorite subjects: food and bears.
Pass me a rib-eye.
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adorable poem...my teddy is on a diet...cuz he ate all my icecream bars Blessings always~ Trisha
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is cute
thanks my little Angel for sharing this with me
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aawwwwwwwwww
I love this sweetie, you are precious and Mr. Teddy is soooooooooooooooooo funny. He was always such a naughty bear. I love you Leanne and I am looking forward to our vacation this summer. Daddy
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me too
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the poem was pretty good can i have one of those sandwhichs????????????? PLEASE,
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Very cute precious. Daddy will love it.
You miss his stories don't you (me too).
I
You!!!!!!!!!!!!
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i really miss those stories
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and all those alliens
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