Sweetest man in my life is
Wild and free, I love how
Each day I’m blessed you see
Every word shared leaves me
Trembling with such heat.
Surrender at will, he has
Offered me his sweet soul too
Understanding, he tends to you
Leaving sweet love in his trail
Ongoing compassion he will do
Whatever he needs to show
Never letting you go, he will remain
Sweetly by your side, a light of hope he is.
My Timothy, my sweet soul, I am
Yours in spirit always, I can not deny.
Heaven sent my darling, when times were tough
Earth was tearing me, so he brought you in my life.
A pleasant gift given, I do my darling, love ya.
Real is the man I speak of, sweet Poeticweaver!
Time he is recognized as Passions beam of light.
Author notes
A contest entry for:
Mirror Acrostics
Write us a mirrored acrostic anything goes, any genre, any style
Dedicated to Poeticweaver, My sweet soul.
LOVE YOU: http://allpoetry.com/user/show/poeticweaver
A contest entry
- Mirror Acrostics by LanguishedLad.
950 points, ended April 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i really like this dediction to a wonderful poet, i love how you have used the given form and showed something so deep within it, he is lucky to have a tallented poet writing about him, i love the picture you have used also, as always keep up the beautiful writing, ~Amy
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Wow,
This really touched my heart and soul precious one!
I'm sorry it took so long for me to reply.
I must of left myself logged in here, Oh dear.
Just wanted you to know, this is the first I've seen this.
And Wow, how truly moving it is.
I'm so blessed to have your sweet soul as a light as well.
In my life you have helped me to.
And you are always appreciated and loved.
I'm honored for this dedication piece sweet passions.
You are my wonderful, Victorious Sweet Soul!
-Timothy aka poeticweaver~
aka Servant Of Shadows. 
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A wonderful Mirrored Acrostic to Timothy honey. I am sure he will adore this when he gets around to reading it. Love you baby...Scott
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Aww what a lovely dedication!!! I'm sure he loved it.
Very well done
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This is amazing if you can write like this from your sick bed what are we going to do when you are well?
This is unbelievable I can't even keep on acrostic in order
A multibunny poem if ever I saw one.
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Amazingly Interesting
I love that the letters at the beginning of each line come together to spell a sentence. I love this!!!
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Awww, this is really sweet. I like the mirror acrostic. The letters really stand out. Good luck to you in the contest.
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awww this is such a beautiful write and dedication mummy that expresses such power and love and heart felt feelings
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