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Entertaining Sunshine Princess

Shortly after the odyssey begins
rainbow colored Sea Horses eating pink cotton candy,
rest from their long days hard ride
after pulling the crystal carriage of Sunshine Princess
to the gala event of Starz of Heaven.

Beneath the sweet blue raspberry ceiling
A band of oysters and a string of pearls
create beautiful music at The Cavern
within the confines of The Sunken Treasure
below Davey Jones' Locker.

The famous Urchins are scheduled to appear
before an audiance of mussels, lobsters and crabs.
Sting Ray will make a grand entrance,
performing tricks of magical wonder,
juggling crimson starfish upon his barbed tail.

Tiger Shark with cinnamon stripes
and his dummy pal Googlie Goggle
take turns on their ventrilaquist act
drinking salted purple hot chocolate
while talking at the same time.

Refreshments are served of sparkling soda pop,
with sides of sugar cane beaded necklaces
and strawberry sponge long cakes piled high.
Giant sour candy pretzels with orange whipped cream
fill the bellies of all who attend.

After awhile everyone must see
Doctor Please Fixmyteeth.
Yeah it's true his name might sound strange
but look at all the good stuff you just ate.
Eat chocolate!  Eat chocolate!  Eat chocolate!









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  • Sunshine Princess
    April 21, 2008

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    I like your poem thank you very much for writing for my contest I hope that you have a very nice evening


  • Lady Altheia
    April 20, 2008

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    Hehehe, i really liked the docotr's name. Sounbds like he does alot of business. I really liked the story and how you included their names.