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Train Tracks Tick

Train tracks tick,
Over themselves,
Repeating the sound,
Of repelling each other.

The direction wildly turns,

But their parallelism sticks.

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  • spirit rising
    December 13, 2008

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    wow, what an amazing use of words, i did not quite understand this from my first read but then when i read it again, slowly taking in each line it came together, i like it!!