In the darkness
fireflies are star twinkles
against the deep,
velvet blue of midnight.
Arms wrapping her closely
in sheltered embrace,
she sips the fragrance
of love's white zinfandel.
Author notes
Nighttime and fireflies make dreams happen!
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
700 points, ended May 7, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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"You've Been Tagged"
Just beautiful such vivid imagery and emotion. I so enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing. Congrats on the trophy. hugs Theresa
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Wonderful
A very gifted write. And so well expressed. Congrats on the honorable mention
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The atmosphere is felt through your words here.
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BEAUTIFUL
for nighttime and fireflies do make dreams happen...for with one does the other lead and magic softly begins...niaish for sharing such beautiful magic with me
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wow!!!! it is very short and flows very well!!!!!! pretty poem! for being so short it is so great!! great job and congrats on ur award!
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Very nice and I agree on the acuracy of you authors notes.
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Stars, dreams and night skies all go together and make magic for us. A soft and pretty write that gives the mind wings to fly away up there too.
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Wonderful write I really enjoyed it alot. This said a great deal for such a short write and I love the picture it is so cool..Thank ou for sharing
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True.
It seems like most dreams happen at nighttime. Nice work, Mother.
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Beautiful and perfect. Thank you my sister
This was really good sis. Got to get back to bed. my medication is working. Talk to you later. love you
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beautifully penned!
this is so lovely...it speaks directly to my heart!
thank you for sharing your time and talent with me...
I am humbled by your amazing ink!
Blessings! Tammy
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Wow... This is beautiful...
Wonderfully done.
Just brilliant!
best of luck in your contest
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