Close your eyes
For you to see me
Is for you to find all my flaws
It will be easier for you to keep eyes open
So you wont misunderstand what you see
Baby dont let me down
Because I'm in love with you
And its something I know will last
No matter what other people may see
No matter what other people say,
I know You'll love me
And everyone else can close there eyes
Because, baby
My Love wont let us down
Baby, you're the only thing that keeps me going
A contest entry
- Inspired by the Beatles! by Reckless Butterfly.
350 points, ended May 10, 2008, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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very sweet! i love it ..
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awwwwwwwwww i love it!!!!!!
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ah i was watching the local news here earlier, i live not that far away from liverpool, and they nominated today beatles day lol
a good piece.
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please remember to use all titles within the poem. thanks
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I assure you all titles are used in my poem, some just not as frequent as others
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