The Dark Clouds are above me,
And they threaten to rain,
Because they are filled with Pain,
But I won't let them pore,
Because it Only lets in more.
More sadness,
More Tears,
More of every thing,
Even fears.
Author notes
i hope it fits the "fears"
No i'm not scared of clouds
but rain...
brings terror
Emo-ness
some how when it is raining
you just seem more sad and scared
so Dark clouds that threaten to rain
can pull out some of your deepest darkest fears from everywhere...
because when it rains
it pores
when it pores
all you can do is sit and think
and when you think your fears rot your thoughts
A contest entry
- The Sum of All My Fears by andywontdie.
4500 points, ended May 5, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Spell Check...Please!, My computer is silly, and for some reason it doesn't work.
Comments
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nice. i believe it is 'pour' though..'pore' is like the pores in our skin :-)
I like the general idea of the poem.
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I can definitely see where storm clouds can be foreboding and quite unnerving. For me, when the sky turns that icky green color like before a tornado, thats what gives me the chills. I like this piece and you did very well without the spell check
But what I would like even more maybe if included some of your AN thoughts into your actual piece and make your thoughts and point more stronger. That way your poem means a lot more and you won't have to put so much in the AN! 
Thanks for your entry and good luck!!! 
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