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a comparason

the butterfly beats her wings
franically
against his hands
gently cupping her
he doesna know
that he is killing her
by simply touching
her wings

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  • lunarlunacy
    May 14

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    i really like the concept of this and the minimalist like style. this could be trimmed down to some real poignant succinctness.
    they really are fragile divinity of nature aren't they.


  • Gwendolynn
    January 1
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    this is just beautiful..it makes me want to cry