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Silver - Entangled in a Thicket
Entangled in a thicket of depression, she can't escape the power of those thorns. Thorns that eventually sever her life.
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by Nighttime angel.
950 points, ended April 20, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well deserved silver
you have done a great job of describing depression. -
oh my!
I like the analogy of the thorns to describe depression. Great write!
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this gives a feeling of being clausrophobic which I think is a feeling that many people can relate to well done sissy
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Sharp & to the point
Feels like a kick in the teeth. Love it!
Congrats on the Silver
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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this is a very dark poem that you have written. a feeling I have known before. one thats hard to escape, its seems once this feeling grabs a hold of you, it never wants to let go no matter the price one pays.
good luck
kat
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Ooooo!
Great write for the prompt. Eerie, gripping, visual, dark. Well done. All the best in this!
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excellent~
This was deep also very dark...
Your imagery is perfect tho
Best of luck in the contest
This is a winner in my book
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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Someone was feeling awefully dark tonight!!! This was incredible!!! Best of luck here...
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Most excellent
Three frogs to you my dear.
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