Sheltered
you and I
within our poetic existence
sharing unblemished fruits
liquid white
that touch November skies
lifting me
upon your winged deliverance
outshining the ornamental display
we embrace ~
together...
Author notes
Your prompt is MY FAVORITE THINGS...
and my THREE favorite things are:
sheltered (a.k.a. Tim! LOL)
white zinfandel
fireflies
pic by Sarah Fagon
A contest entry
- BLOW MY MIND! by Tam.
700 points, ended May 7, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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How very smooth you are...
I must go look in the mirror
and see if I am blushing.
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beautifully said...love the images you bring to mind...and supple feelings you stir with the softness of your words...to touch
Mal
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awww this is such a beautiful write mummy your words are simply diving and stunning with such strong and beautiful imagery. you continue to amaze me
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Aw ~ Link & Saria from Legend of Zelda.
In other words ~ your chosen picture is win. 
Now, as for the poem, simply stunning. Marvelous imagery... and such a language, mom! I am always stunned by the way that you write. I admire your penning.... so please, keep sharing your beautiful words!
Good luck in the contest!
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oh my word...
this is simply DIVINE...
I am in tears...
and the picture is just perfect!
you have taken my three favorite things and penned them into magic...
I am honored!
Blessings! Tammy
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Beautiful...
Love the vibe in this one.
Best of luck in the contest.
Delila
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