The world revolves around me
The iris and tulip heads spin
I’m a lovely rose
That none can match in beauty
Petals open to the sun
And the sun marks me
Orange like it,
Right in the center.
Petals fan out,
White to pink.
Gorgeousness unsurpassed
The world twirling about me.
This is the life of a rose.
Author notes
-freckle central-
A contest entry
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523 points, ended April 29, 2008, 12 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Very good
I love it... Lines 6 and 7 especially and th 9 to 12 as well. Your writing is very pretty
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i loved it! Totally sweet poem!
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Wow, this is really descriptive and beautiful. I like it a lot, the imagery is great.
I haven't commented on your poems for a while. . . I have a bunch to read. Yay!
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