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I need her

She stands alone
in my hearts mind
It's her I hold

To hear her name
upon my tongue
a sweetness comes

My days are gold
when woke from dream
of loving her

A flower grew
amongst the weeds
from knowing her

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  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 13, 2008

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    Beautiful

    "A flower grew
    amongst the weeds
    from knowing her"

    What a wonderful person she must be to have made such a lovely bloom. Best of luck in the contest

  • Word poet
    May 4, 2008

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    Very nice poem its beautiful yet straight to the point you must be talking about your daughter who you love very much.. I'm not sure if you have a daughter or someone elses daughter very nicely done..