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I say to you.

The World today isn't that great,

What do you say?

 

 

God made our hands and there we shall hold the future,

But look at the World now, What has it become?

What have we done?

 

 

We've made the World what it is now today,

Satisfied?

 

 

I don't think so.

 

 

So to those of you who would like to make a

difference in this World.

 

 

I say to you,

 

 

 

The Future is in your hands.

 

 

 

 

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    July 27, 2008

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    Great!

    This is a terrific write & perfect for the prompt! Bravo dear girl. You express this with great passion & I like the structure of the poem. You get the message across well. Love this!

  • aaaaaaaa
    July 6, 2008

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    so true! I wish everyone would want to change the future and bring unity to humanity, but unfortunately people do not want to compromise. It's such a shame.


  • tawk gold member
    May 16, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    Y e s w e a l l n e e d t o q u i t t a l k i n g a b o u t m a k i n g a d i f f e r e n c e a n d d o s o m e t h i n g t o h e l p o u r w o r l d f o r i f w e d o n' t o n e d a y i t w i l l b e g o n e. T h a n k s f o r s h a r i n g. l o v e a n d h u g s T h e r e s a


  • Polaja Greeters member
    May 16, 2008

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    Hood-Winked!

    The word 'shall' doesn't have an apostrophe in it... apart from that this was a very deserving honorable mention and I really liked the sentiment of your words

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • aeolia
    April 27, 2008
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    The world's beautiful, but yeah, it can be messed up; that's why I'm joining the Peace Corps, to help people who need it the most. This is such a true write.

    "we sha'll hold the future" -- do you mean "shall"?

    -Cristina


  • Stardust-luvr
    April 23, 2008

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    well done and with intense empowered thought from your own spirit. Yes the world needs change and it takes a wee single person to make a difference - even one so minute. Whether the changes are in land or not the chnages within a smile or an offer of volunteered assistance can make a difference. I used to think i wasn't making much of a difference as i used to call it my job (I work with severely challenged special needs preschoolers) but when i see a smile upon a child I work with or their first steps then i know i have made a difference in someone's life as we can hope the domino chain shall continue - with one helping hand helps another and etc etc. thank you for entering and many blessings always xxx


  • TakenforLife
    April 23, 2008
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    Awesome write

    This is a very true write! Excellent job!


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    April 21, 2008

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    yay! great poem

    the world is not screwed, the world has powerful hands
    of hope and
    it all begins with me and you.
    So boo hoo to poor old Joe below
    for he now shows how empty is his soul!
    ears/Seattle great poem, we the ordinary CAN
    Make A HUGE EXTRA-ordinary difference
    just by rolling up sleeves with one
    step at a time!


  • Paladin Warrior
    April 21, 2008
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    everyone hands are full, so the world is screwed.....joe

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