Contest Entry:
Glazed eyes stare
forwards --
Perhaps learning could come,
of this.
Freedom doesn't matter
When you have neither legs
nor lips.
I knew the limit when I wrote this
this is not an entry
this is just a tacky add-on
^.^
Take two steps towards the front gate
and he's already waiting there.
Gawking at me promising
that he'll bring to me despair -
and as I wait tentative in line,
his grin seems to spread further 'cross his face.
but the pressure is unbearable, and
I run screaming from this place
~
Author notes
Image Inspiration Credit U P P E R H A N D A R T on Flickr
See contest page for picture prompt.
Requesting permission for a one-word over
A contest entry
- Sunday Pic Quickie - Clarity of vision - Luna-Midnight (more points added) by Unsigned.
470 points, ended April 21, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Positive and Critique feedback most appreciated...
Comments
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No taky add ons allowed...
the poem...nice...
Best wishes
Simon -
take the word ever out, and you can put it back in after the contest if you want, im sorry but rules are rules
now about the poem
wonderfully done
i abs love it =)
thanks for entering and good luck =)
stephanie
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